[已解决问题] 帮忙写一篇英语短文,《金钱能换来幸福吗》
提问者:nicole7 - Q核八级  [收藏]
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100字左右,越简单越好,谢谢~

问题补充:kyqlee的不错,非常感谢~
但是要摆明观点,要清清楚楚的说,能还是不能
一般结构是这样:开头一段,亮明观点
中间阐述理由
最后一段总结


最佳答案
Money and happiness are two of the most powerful forces in our lives. I regard money not as a top priority but as an entity stores values, what we structure our lives around. Understanding the value that money holds can change our lives, define what we do and who we become. People consider money to be power or prestige will brandish it as a sword, those who think it as security may cling to it. It is all depends on our beliefs and personal situations. So yes! Money can buy happiness, if we use it as a resource to achieve what we truly value in life. Undersand yourself, understand the value that money holds, and you will get happiness, or even help others to find their own.
觉得怎么样?
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呵呵,我的观点就是So yes! Money can buy happiness。
根据你的开头-阐述-总结再写写。(天啊,100字以内,能说的完么?)

开头: Most people, including me, agree that, to a certain extent, money brings happiness.

阐述: These two of the most powerful forces in our lives, especially the former one, are what we structure our lives around. I regard money not as a top priority but as an entity stores values. Understanding the value that money holds can define what we do and who we become, even change our lives. People consider money to be power or prestige will brandish it as a sword, those who think it as security may cling to it. It is all depends on our beliefs and personal situations.

总结: So yes! Money can bring happiness, if we use it as a resource to achieve what we truly value in life. Undersand yourself, understand the value that money holds, and you will get your happiness, or even help others to find their own.
2007-6-6 21:28:33 回答者:kyqlee


提问者对于答案的评价:Thanks
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你还不如写好中文,拿上来翻译好了。
11个月前   回答者:yumumao - Q枝四级
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