[已解决问题] 帮我看看作文~Online Education
Being online is no longer something strange in our life. To some degree,it has become part of our daily life. We can do a lot of things online,such searching for information and communicating with friends far and near. But recently another helpful online activity has become very "in". That is online education.
Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology. Today, modern science and technology we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. However, due to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid.
Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It's indeed a helpful complement to the traditional education means. It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning. Most of all, with online education, we can sick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge.
问题补充：请大家帮忙看看有没有什么语法问题，用词错误什么的？
Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology. Today, modern science and technology we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. However, due to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid.
Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It's indeed a helpful complement to the traditional education means. It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning. Most of all, with online education, we can sick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge.
问题补充：请大家帮忙看看有没有什么语法问题，用词错误什么的？
最佳答案
不错，这篇文章写得比上次的好了两个档次！！！但是看你的文章还是有几个问题让我非常不解
1。such （as) searching
2。But recently another helpful online activity has become very "in". That is online education. 开头不能用but.
3。Among other reasons??不知所云。 是不是应改为 all
4。due to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid. due to 用在这里让我不知道你想表达什么意思。
5。we can（ sick ）to our jobs 。 sick ???你是想用stick吗？
1。such （as) searching
2。But recently another helpful online activity has become very "in". That is online education. 开头不能用but.
3。Among other reasons??不知所云。 是不是应改为 all
4。due to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid. due to 用在这里让我不知道你想表达什么意思。
5。we can（ sick ）to our jobs 。 sick ???你是想用stick吗？
2007-4-4 12:00:44
回答者：chipmunk0606
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