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我刚无意在网上看到我以前公司的竞争对手兼同行在委托外服公司发布招聘信息 我很心仪这家公司 不仅行业一样 而且招的职位和我之前做的职务一样 但是是5月份发布的 不知道还OPEN伐 所以我现在了给HR写信
我写的惨不忍睹 非常拿不出手 大家不要笑 请帮我改改 润润色
Dear efesco'hr,
I have been searching for a job for a while and just found the XXX委托efesco发布的招聘信息, XXX是我很心仪的公司，它和我以前公司是同行，这次招的职务也和我之前做的工作内容一样，which I am very interested at this position,if that suitable post was still turned up,please recommend me.
问题补充：1楼和我一样 都是GOOGLE语言工具的爱好者。。。
我刚无意在网上看到我以前公司的竞争对手兼同行在委托外服公司发布招聘信息 我很心仪这家公司 不仅行业一样 而且招的职位和我之前做的职务一样 但是是5月份发布的 不知道还OPEN伐 所以我现在了给HR写信
我写的惨不忍睹 非常拿不出手 大家不要笑 请帮我改改 润润色
Dear efesco'hr,
I have been searching for a job for a while and just found the XXX委托efesco发布的招聘信息, XXX是我很心仪的公司，它和我以前公司是同行，这次招的职务也和我之前做的工作内容一样，which I am very interested at this position,if that suitable post was still turned up,please recommend me.
问题补充：1楼和我一样 都是GOOGLE语言工具的爱好者。。。
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Dear efesco'hr,
I have been searching for a job for a while and just found the XXX efesco issued by the candidates, XXX is I am exactly the company, and I had a peer companies, the duties of the bills before and I also do the work of the same content,which I am very interested at this position,if that suitable post was still turned up,please recommend me. 个人理解,仅供参考! 1、不要只是长句，让HR很难阅读 2、称谓不能缩写hr，很不礼貌，如有名字写Mr. xxx 3、称谓不用写公司，在Dear xxx上面两行的地方应该还有一个抬头写公司全称和地址 4、应该除了这封信以外还有一个英文简历(resume)吧 Sample: August xxx, 2008 Efesco xxx Limited 36 floor, Block 2, Fortone building Backstreet 36, Guangzhou Dear Human Resource Manager, I am writing to apply for the position of xxxx which was posted on the website of xxx. I find this position quite suitable and enjoyable for me as I have rich experience in the relevant area. My hands-on working experience in xxx company as a xxx ensures me a well understanding of the job nature. I am confident that I can quickly get familiar with the company's operation process and make my contribution to the team. Dear manager, if this position is still available for application, could you consider my qualification to be a member of Efesco? I appreciate any opportunity to have a face-to-face interview with you and look forward to your reply soon. Best Regards xxxxx 楼上理解错了，提问者不是去Efesco工作，而是去the xxx工作。 Dear Human Resource Manager, I have been searching for a job for quite a while and I am glad to know that the xxx has consigned to your distinguished company the task of recruiting for them.Honestly speaking I have long longed to work for the xxx and by the way I have a lot of skill and experience in the posotion wanted.I wonder if the position still remains vacant.If so, please take me into your consideration and I ensure you that I will make myself an excellent member of the xxx,and I won't let you down. Hope to hear from you soon. Best Wishes xxxxxxx |
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