[已解决问题] 高手帮帮忙,我想给教授写Email
我想给英语,教授写Email,问他新学期什么时候开始上英语课,地点在哪?这次是学些什么课程,我需要准备些什么?顺便想问一下我的日语课的测试和上课的时间,看他知道不?要用很礼貌的问法.我自己写的点,但总觉得不好,大家可以帮我改改吗,或想些更好的语句.我觉得我表达的不太清楚,谢谢大家了.
With the holiday being over , I want to know when and which classroom the English courses will be start .(could you tell me that when and which classroom will start The english lessons ?) what will studies and prepare for this lessons ? Do you know when will have Japanese course and test ? Looking forward to your email, thank you very much.
Best wishes.
With the holiday being over , I want to know when and which classroom the English courses will be start .(could you tell me that when and which classroom will start The english lessons ?) what will studies and prepare for this lessons ? Do you know when will have Japanese course and test ? Looking forward to your email, thank you very much.
Best wishes.
最佳答案
首先我认为你有这些疑问按理应当问教务处吧。
此外，我认为With the holiday being over没有提供任何信息，教授不需要你提醒;
which classroom我觉得用where更好;
English course用English class更好，course我个人觉得常见的只有take the course选了(过)某门课这样的用法;
looking forward to your email中email用reply更好;
我没有写过类似的信，我认为请求信息不要说太多无关紧要的话。
缩进是5个字符
我的版本:
Dear Prof. XXX, (此处是逗号)
*****I'm writing to ask when and where to have our English class in the upcoming semester, and what's the focus of this term's study. Is there anything I shall prepare before the class starts?
*****I'm also wondering when our Japanese class starts and when to take the test.
*****I'm looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.
******************************YYY
此外，我认为With the holiday being over没有提供任何信息，教授不需要你提醒;
which classroom我觉得用where更好;
English course用English class更好，course我个人觉得常见的只有take the course选了(过)某门课这样的用法;
looking forward to your email中email用reply更好;
我没有写过类似的信，我认为请求信息不要说太多无关紧要的话。
缩进是5个字符
我的版本:
Dear Prof. XXX, (此处是逗号)
*****I'm writing to ask when and where to have our English class in the upcoming semester, and what's the focus of this term's study. Is there anything I shall prepare before the class starts?
*****I'm also wondering when our Japanese class starts and when to take the test.
*****I'm looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.
******************************YYY
2008-3-27 12:37:10
回答者：zhao5578094
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Hello, you have made the grammar mistake. Maybe you just think the English in Chinese. For example, "I want to know when and which classroom the English courses will be start" is just a chinese English sentence. To be frankly, it is difficult to modify your Email. I suggest you refer to a sample. Sorry Professor ***, It's my pleasure to express my sincere gratitude to you for your considerate and serious teaching.I do benefit from you very much,so I expect to go to your class continuely.Can you tell me the schedule of English and Japanese class next semester (including time and address)and what I should prepare for.By the way,can you tell me when the Japanese test will be made? looking forward to your reply. At last, I'd like to express my gratitude to you again and wish you a successful career. sincerely yours. |
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