[已解决问题] 急！请大家帮我看下语句有什么问题，错误的地方或更好的句来表达
由于我身体不舒服没来得及请假没去上课,本想第2天发Email给老师，谁知在路上碰到了，因为当时有点匆忙，没听得太明白，好像是说下个星期有个conversation，不知道这个是不是期末考试，也不清楚是关于什么话题，我要准备些什么，于是写封Email给老师，希望大家帮我修正下，谢谢！
I'm sorry I missed your class this Monday.The fact that i'm feeling under the weather.
I have met you this week ,I know that there is will a conversation next week from you .because of I was a litter hurry and haven't understood all you said at that time.so i'd like to make sure it .can you tell me if this conversation is last-term test ? what theme is adout conversation ? what perpare i need to do ? at last ,i want to make sure whether times and place haven't changed .I'm looking forward to your reply.thank you very much .
问题补充：麻烦大家详细改正
由于是对老师发邮件,我不太确定是否用
I was so hurry that i did not understand well
是不是不够礼貌
I'm sorry I missed your class this Monday.The fact that i'm feeling under the weather.
I have met you this week ,I know that there is will a conversation next week from you .because of I was a litter hurry and haven't understood all you said at that time.so i'd like to make sure it .can you tell me if this conversation is last-term test ? what theme is adout conversation ? what perpare i need to do ? at last ,i want to make sure whether times and place haven't changed .I'm looking forward to your reply.thank you very much .
问题补充：麻烦大家详细改正
由于是对老师发邮件,我不太确定是否用
I was so hurry that i did not understand well
是不是不够礼貌
最佳答案
I'm sorry I was absent from your class of this Monday. The reason was that i was not feeling quite well.
I came across you this week and you told me that there would be a conversation with you next week. As I was in a hurry and did not quite understand what "a conversation" would be about, I'm writing to ask if this conversation is the final exam, what the conversation would be like and what preparations I'm supposed to make for it.
By the way, I want to know if the time and the place of the conversation remain the same.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
帮你整个改了一遍。小问题较多。你再对照看看吧。
2008-1-24 15:24:47
回答者：vincent985
提问者对于答案的评价：发现自己写的确实有很多问题，谢谢修改！
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I know that there is will a conversation next week from you . 語病：there is will 兩個謂語了哦。可以改成：I know that a conversation will be hold next week . because of I was a litter hurry and haven't understood all you said at that time. 可以改成： I was so hurry that haven't catched all you said at that time. I know that there will be a conversation next week so i'd like to make sure of it I know that there is will a conversation （there will be a） because of I was a litter hurry and haven't understood all you said at that time.so i'd like to make sure it .（i was so hurry that i did not understand well） The fact（ is） that i'm feeling under the weather. so i'd like to make sure it （so i'd like to make sure） what theme is adout conversation ? （what is the theme of this conversation） what perpare i need to do ? （ what should i prepare ） i want to make sure （know）whether（if） times （time）and place haven't （has）changed 。（或者want to know whether.......has changed or not） The fact that i'm feeling under the weather.改成:The fact is that i'm feeling under the weather. I know that there is will a conversation next week from you .可以改成：I know that there will be a conversation next week. because of I was a litter hurry and haven't understood all you said at that time.so i'd like to make sure it .可以改成:I was so hurry that I couldn't understand what you said very well. can you tell me if this conversation is last-term test ? 可以改成: Could you tell me if this conversation is the part of the final exam? what perpare i need to do ? 可以改成: What should I prepare for this conversation? at last ,i want to make sure whether times and place haven't changed .可以改成: I also want to know whether time and place has changed or not. theme改成topic是否会好点？ 还有就是Dear ... Your sincerely,...最好写一下。 虽然说您和老师碰过面了，是否需要再在您的email里重申下呢？class, number. email主题里也得注明课程，否则会被勿删。（外教尤其得注意：)） The fact (is) that i'm feeling under the weather. I know that there is will (will be) a conversation next week from you because of I was a litter hurry and haven't understood all you said at that time(I was so hurry that I could not understand what you said ) i'd like to make sure it(省it) what theme is adout conversation (what is the theme about the conversation) what perpare i need to do (what should I need to prepare ) at last ,i want to make sure whether times and place haven't changed(whether time and place have changed or not) |
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