沪江小Q / 全部问题 / 实用英语 / 基础英语

英语 |  日语 |  法语 |  韩语 |  部落 |  小D |  网店 |  网校 |  公益 |  更多
我要举报 [已解决问题]

200字小作文写作

提问者: wx19850721 - Q籽一级 
悬赏沪元:80 浏览 9970 次
on divorce/is divorce a failure in marriage?
最佳答案
以下是关于离婚的2篇范文  和 一篇关于离婚的相关消息。供参考

Why Divorce Rate Is on the Rise?
  It is a social phenominon that divorce rate is on the rise. At first glance, it seems a retrogression of social civilization. By further analysis, it is not hard to see the social and economic reasons for it.
  In the past, marriage used to be confined by family backgrounds. Some talented people could not find the spouses of their hearts because of their family origin. Some were married with reluctance in their heart to those beneath them. Such a marriage can not bring happiness.
  As time edvances young people put a higher standard on marriage. They want to have more in common with their life-long companion. To them, marriage is the unity of body and soul. They associate love more with esteem and admiration than with passion. Some are too young to fall in Iove. When they are in passion, they marry each other. When the passion is gone, the marriage is over. That is an irresponsible attitude. The young people would rather separate than tolerate, so they unite easily and separate quickly.
  With the open-door policy, more people are getting rich. More money brings threat to the stability of marriage. Some spend money lavishly on material comforts and seek after beautiful  young women. As a result, more families are broke. Money cannot buy true love and happiness.
离婚率为什么上升?
  离婚率上升是一个社会现象,乍一看,这是社会文明的倒退,再一分析,则不难看出有其社会和经济原因。
  过去,婚姻受到家庭出身的限制。一些有才能的人由于家庭出身的原因不能找到称心如意的对象,一些人心里不情愿地和不如意的人结了婚,这样的婚姻不会幸福。
   随着时代的前进,人们对婚姻的要求也越高。他们要求与终生伴侣有更多的共同之处。对于他们,婚姻是灵魂和肉体的统一。他们把爱情与尊重、敬佩相连的程度超过激情。有的人太年轻不宜谈恋爱。凭着一时的激情结婚,激情一过,婚姻也如过眼烟云,这是不负责任的态度。选些年轻人宁愿分手不愿忍受,因此也就聚得容易
散得快。
  由于政策开放,更多的人变富,钱多给稳定的婚姻带来威胁。有的人花钱如流水,追求物质享受和年轻美女,结果家庭破裂。金钱并不能要到真正的爱情和幸福。
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Study the following reportage carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. interpret the reportage,
2. point out the reasons for the problem, and
3. suggest possible ways to solve the problem.

You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

题目:
本报记者报道自20世纪70年代末以来,中国的离婚率持续上升。离婚水平已超过邻国日本和韩国,与新加坡同属亚洲离婚率较高的国家。这是近日中国社会科学院人口学专家唐灿发布的调研报告中指出的。这份报告还写到,据2003年北京市统计年鉴公布的数据,2002年北京市的离婚总数为38756对,当年户籍人口为1136.3万,粗离婚率达到6.82‰;当年的结婚对数为76136对,由此计算离结率高达50.90%。也就是说,这一年平均不到两对夫妻结婚就有一对夫妻离婚,北京市的离婚率已经成为全国最高。

审题:
这是一道相当特殊的题目,是就一段汉语的新闻报道命题,提纲却是传统的模式。这类形式题目出现的比率不大,我们在本书中穿插了个别这样的题目主要是为了拓展大家的视野,而且这类题目所涉及的主题也是非常重要的,很有可能以图画题或图表题等主流形式考察到。

Sample:

According to the above news report, the divorce rate in China keeps increasing since 1970’s, and now is higher than that in Japan and Korea. It was also reported that the ratio of divorced couples to married couples reached 1 to 2 in 2002 in Beijing.

From my point of view, the problem of high divorce rate in our country can be analyzed from three perspectives. To begin with, owing to economic development and women’s liberation, the traditional family mode has changed greatly. Now in most cases the two parties of a marriage are psychologically and economically independent. Second, because of the higher living standard and onechild policy, many young people have shaped a selfcentered personality, which is liable to result in lack of mutual care and understanding. Third, when all the social members become more and more openminded, people are less restricted to the traditional conception of marriage. Third parties, extramarital love and online marriage all pose great threats to the legal marriage.

As we all know, healthy marriages are beneficial not only to the couples themselves, but also to the growth of the children and to the stability of the whole society. Therefore, it is worthwhile to make efforts to reduce the divorce rate. Before they get married, young couples should be emotionally and psychologically well prepared for all possible conditions and changes in marriage. Furthermore, school and family education should help enhance the sense of responsibility, which is not only the key to a healthy marriage but also to a successful career.

点评:

文章共分三段。第一段是将新闻报道中最重要的信息提炼出来,这是看大家的基本功是否扎实。第二段给出了该现象的原因。第三段是解决问题的办法。

第一段共有两句话,第一句话说国内的离婚率一路攀升,已超过了日本和韩国。第二句话说北京的离结率已高达1∶2。

第二段是写原因的段落,共分三个方面来写。第一点写传统家庭模式的巨大变化。第二点写年轻人以自我为中心的人格的形成,容易导致相互关爱与理解的缺失。第三点说人们的传统婚姻家庭观念的松动。

第三段写解决办法。先说健康的婚姻对夫妻、孩子和社会均有益,推导至减少离婚率是很有意义的事。首先说年轻人应在结婚时做好准备,以应对婚姻中的各种情形及变化。另外,学校和家庭教育应着重加强他们的责任感,这对婚姻和事业都是大有益处的。 该文是特殊的出题方式,如果我们考试中遇到特殊的形式,也不必慌乱,一定要看清楚具体的要求,这样就可以有的放矢了。看到熟悉的方式甚至题目,也不要过于欣喜,一定要把优势转化成胜势。

心得:

该文有许多好的语言点值得学习。

首段的news report相当于提纲中的reportage,意思是“新闻报道”。

次段首句的perspective意思是“角度”。第四句的onechild policy表示“计划生育的一孩政策”,selfcentered personality表示“以自我为中心的个性”,mutual care and understanding表示“相互关爱和理解”。第五句中的openminded表示“思想开明的”。第六句中的pose great threats to表示“对……构成重大威胁”。

第三段中的enhance the sense of responsibility表示“加强责任感”。
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Divorce and Kids
Divorce is transforming the lives of American children.In the past World War 2 generation, more than 80 percent of children grew up with both biological parents.  Today only half will do so.  Each year
more than a million children experience family breakup: about as many are born out of wedlock.
    At the same time, the problems associated with family disruption have grown. Overall child well-being has declined,despite historically high public spending. The teen suicide rate has almost tripled. Juvenile crime has increased and become more violent. School performance has been poor.
    In 1971 Judith Wallerstein, a clinical psychologist, and her staff began interviewing middle-class children in the San Francisco area at the time their parents broke up. She discovered the children seemed to be doing worse. Five years after breakup, her research shows, more than a third of the children were experiencing moderate or severe depression. At ten years a significant number to be troubled, drifting, underachieving. At 15 years many, now adults, were struggling to establish strong love relationships of their own.
    Research shows that girls in single-parent families are at greater risk for teenage marriage, nonmarital birth, and divorce than girls in two-parent families---and that this is true regardless of race or income. Also, children in disrupted families are nearly twice as likely to drop out of high school. Boys are at greater risk of dropping out than girls and are more prone to aggressive behavior.
    Over the past 25 years Americans have been conducting a vast natural experiment in family life. The results are becoming clear. Adults have benefited from the changes, but not children. Indeed, this may be the first generation to do worse psychologically and socially than their parents.
    The novelist Pat Conroy has observed that"each divorce is the death of a small civilization. "No one feels this more acutely than children.

登录以后可看到完整内容!没有账号?立即注册»
2007/11/22 19:03:20 回答者:vincent985


提问者对于答案的评价:多谢了~~~
其它回答(1)
Divorce seems to have become a common modern phenomenon in almost every culture in the word.  In  our  traditational concept, most of people think it is a failure  in marriage.But ,now ,more and more people think a divorce maybe a happy start  for a  couple of their new life.  Even  though they don't love each  other anymore,may  apart is a good way .
4年前 回答者: Belinda1017 - Q籽一级
   您需要登录以后才能查看评论及回答问题!没有账号?立即注册»

我的问题    我要提问




相关链接

快到期问题