[已解决问题] 外企转正申请,请大家帮着翻译下
提问者:hzzj - Q籽一级  [收藏]
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这个月就要转正了,转正申请里需要填写一栏“自我评价”,我翻不好,自己翻的感觉很中国化,由于我们是意大利公司,他们也不是母语,所以如果我写的太中国化估计他们更看不懂了。特求助。急急急!请高手帮个忙翻成英语。多谢多谢!
原文如下,翻个大概意思就成。

公司宽松融洽的工作氛围、团结向上的企业文化,各部门领导和同事的耐心指导,使我在较短的时间内适应了公司的工作环境,也熟悉了公司的整个操作流程。
在本部门的工作中,我一直严格要求自己,认真及时做好领导布置的每一项任务;专业和非专业上不懂的问题虚心向同事学习请教,不断提高充实自己,希望能尽早独当一面,为公司做出更大的贡献。当然,刚进公司,难免出现一些小差小错需要指正;但前事之鉴,后事之师,这些经历也让我不断成熟,在处理各种问题时考虑得更全面,杜绝类似失误的发生。在此,我要特地感谢部门的领导和同事对我的入职指引和帮助,感谢他们对我工作中出现的失误的提醒和指正。
经过这六个月,我现在已经能够独立处理本部门事务,整理部门内部各种资料,熟悉了Oracle系统的操作,从整体上把握了工作流程。当然我还有很多不足,处理问题的经验方面有待提高,需要不断继续学习以提高自己业务能力和英语水平。
最佳答案
hzzj: Good luck. I did my best, but I don't think they have something similar to this in the west, after a probation period there is usually an evaluation, however, it is usually a face-to-face two-way discussion, rather than a report.

Good luck with your career.

Cheers.
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It has been only a short while since I started working with xxx (the name of the company), during that time, I have adjusted and adapted well into the xxx's corporate culture. I could have only achieved this with the support and guidance of my colleagues and managers. I also attribute this to the friendly working environment, and the team spirit at the firm.

I have always set myself a high standard in my daily work. I set priorities in my work, and complete all tasks on time and with dedication. Where I feel I am lacking in either soft (non-technical) or hard (technical) skills, I seek input from my colleagues, which helped me to improve continuously. By learning from each other, and working as a team with my colleague, I am hoping I will soon be able to make bigger contribution to xxx.

I have also encountered various challenges in the meantime, however, this has helped me to learn more about what could go wrong, and how to resolve problems and provide solutions. Here, I would like to thank my department heads and colleagues for their assistance, and in particular those who have helped me with those challenges.

After six months' hard work, I am now able to handle various tasks independently within the department, including managing departmental information and research material, clear understanding of the operational aspect of the Oracle system, and a comprehensive grasp of various company policies and procedures. I also realise there are many aspects where I could improve. I would like to accumulate more corporate knowledge, also improve my technical/professional know-how and English skills.

It has been a steep learning curve for me, and I am glad that I have joined xxx, and trust with my hard work and continuous support of my colleagues and managers, I will grow with xxx to a brighter future.
2007-9-14 6:36:19 回答者:llcede


提问者对于答案的评价:感谢大家的支持,选这篇文章是因为感觉更符合英文的语言习惯。其他同学我也会转帐的。再次谢谢大家!
其它回答(2)
The company loose harmonious work atmosphere, the unity upwardenterprise culture, various departments leader and colleague's patientinstruction, caused me to adapt company's working conditions in ashorter time, also has been familiar with company's entire operationflow.
In in this department's work, I continuously strictly request oneself,earnestly promptly completes the leadership arrangement each duty;Specialized and in non- specialty the question modestly studies to thecolleague consults, unceasingly enhances enriches oneself, hoped canassume sole responsibility for an important task as soon as possible,makes a bigger contribution for the company. Certainly, just enteredthe company, unavoidably appeared some small difference small to bewrong needs to point out mistakes; But warning the antecedent, teacherof the things to do after death, these experiences also lets me beunceasingly mature, when deals with each kind of issue consideredcomprehensively, ceases the similar fault the occurrence. In this, theleader and the colleague which I must especially thank the departmententers the duty direction and the help to me, thank them the faultreminder which works to me appears and points out mistakes.
After these six months, I now already could independent processingthis department business, reorganize department interior each kind ofmaterial, has been familiar with the Oracle system operation, hasgrasped the work flow from the whole. Certainly I also have very manyinsufficiencies, the processing question experience aspect wait forthe enhancement, needs unceasingly to continue to study sharpens theoneself professional ability and English proficiency.

  1年前   回答者:nlm192733 - Q芽二级
Thanks to the harmonious atmosphere and active corporate culture as well as the patient and elaborate direction of my great leader and colleagues in each department of our company, I have totally adjusted myself to this new working atmosphere, at the meantime, be familiar with the whole flow of the work.
During my working, I demanded myself strictly, treat each task in earnest and in time. If there are some technical proplems that I am incompetent to deal with, I will modestly seek advice from my colleages, to promote myself by making up for the deficiency. I am filled with desire to make contribution for our great company. Of course, I have made some mistakes in early time, fortunately, I clearly know that calamity has been my teacher. It is just those mistakes which make me mature and teach me how to conside things all sidely.
During the six monthes, I have got familiar with the relevant affairs in my department,including sorting out all kinds of information and data and mastery of Oracle system operation. Of course, there are still some deficiency in my work, such as my lacking of experiences on effeciently treating problems which is in need of much effort on my professional ability and english language proficiency.
In short, I should appreciate all the help of my leaders and colleages here, otherwise it is less possible for me to make any progress in my work, I will keep myself forward and sincerely hope that I can make more contribution to our great company form now on..
P.S. 为了让文章通畅,第一段最后一句和最后一段稍微做了一下调整哦~^_^
  1年前   回答者:tssongsong - Q苗三级
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