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今日练习：
1、有些购物商场的地下停车场是如此的庞大复杂，以至大厦主管只好用不同颜色的地区来标示和提示那些司机他们的车子停在哪里。
2、我的朋友Joey倒是一点都不在乎那些不同颜色的区域标识和车位编号。
3、并不是他拥有超强的记忆能力，而是他只记从哪部电梯进入商场，然后记住从电梯到停车处的标识就行了。
4、有一次无论那些色彩区域标示得如何仔细，Joey都无法找到自己的车。
5、因为他之前乘搭的电梯停用了，不过他相信他迟早会找到自己的车的。


Ahu的仿写也只是一个参考，没有标准答案哦！讨论之后谁提出了更好的表达句式，将会红包100奖励！
Some underground parking places under major shopping malls are so huge that managements have to use different color zones to give car drivers rough location indication of where their cars were parked. My friend Joey was not in the least concerned with which color zone and parking slot number. It was not that he has amazing memory capability, but he just remembered which lift he took to get into shopping mall and the rough direction from the lift to the car. One time no matter how detailed those zone marks, Joey did not have any clue on where his car was. As the lift he took before was shut down, but he believe that sooner or later he was going to find the car.
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  2个月前   lee878738708:
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今天的好绕，
==批改


My friend Joey is not in the least cared[concerned] about

就是这个，应该是care about; be concerned about
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  2个月前   elysion:
NO825:
he just remembered which lift he took to get into shopping mall and the rough direction from the lift to the car.
这段话，我翻的很混乱。
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  2个月前   zhuyiminzhuy:
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no matter how detailed those zone marks, Joey did not have any clue on where his car was.这一句确实很地道
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  2个月前   茉莉清茶:
No.7

【总结】
1.颜色的区域 color zones
2.在乎 concerned with
3.车位编号 parking slot number
4.无法找到自己的车 did not have any clue on where his car was
5.停用 shut down

【疑问】
1.第一句中“提示那些司机他们的车子停在哪里”，我翻得是"remaind those drivers location where their cars are",不确定这里的从句，自己结构用得对不对，用where还是which

2.第三句中“记忆能力”，可以说memory ability吗?


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  2个月前   DOYOFYZJ:
NO: 99

今天的不好翻译呢，对比了AHU的答案，发现自己翻译的东东很直白的，就是把英文的按照字面意思直译成中文了，很多地方都很生硬,一看就是中国式英语.
比如"电梯停用",就翻为 the elevator he took before was out of use/service/commission,可是AHU改变了一下,翻译为电梯关闭了，就更生动和合理了。
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  2个月前   自强不息:
no.922
有一次无论那些色彩区域标示得如何仔细，Joey都无法找到自己的车

习惯先说Joey无法找到自己的车，再说的是原因。
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  2个月前   cathysh:
To: 清茶
【疑问】
1.第一句中“提示那些司机他们的车子停在哪里”，我翻得是"remaind those drivers location where their cars are",不确定这里的从句，自己结构用得对不对，用where还是which

2.第三句中“记忆能力”，可以说memory ability吗?
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1. location 可拿掉, 改成remind those drivers where their cars are.
或者改成remind those drivers of their cars' location.
remind sb of sth.
remind sb to do sth.
remind sb + 宾主从句

2. 可以的~




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  2个月前   crime_mind:
068
Coming~~Please wait~~^^
借鉴了N多ahu的……好说不好听，就是抄袭……(T~T)……

Some shopping mall's underground parking areas are so huge that managers of the building have to use different color zones to remind the drivers where their cars are. My friend Joey was not at least concerned about which color zone and parking slot number. It wasn't his incredible ability of memoring, but he just memorized which elevator he entered the shop, then remember the rough direction from the elevator to the car. One time, no matter how detailed those colorful zones marked, he just couldn't find his car. As the elevator he took before has shut down. But he believe that he will find his car sooner or later.


这个电梯涅，俺习惯用elevator……
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  2个月前   郁郁林林:
no512
先占个位，明天再来
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  2个月前   viviangg:
No.42我来啦
还有两课啦。

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  2个月前   beanxyz:
One time no matter how detailed those zone marks, Joey did not have any clue on where his car was.
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时态不统一哦
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  2个月前   狂爱Mika:
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学到的知识点：
1、be not in the least concerned with 对……一点都不在乎
2、parking slot number 车位编号
3、One time no matter how detailed those zone marks
one time 一次 （自己忘记翻译“一次”了……）no matter how 无论如何
4、have a clue on 找到
5、shut down 停工; 关闭, 机器关机
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  2个月前   vito_wu:
No.23

今天的仿写确实挺抓狂滴~
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  2个月前   惜晴轩:
学号：727号
学到了不少词组和表达方式~~~
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  2个月前   当当熊:
No.47
KEY EXPRESSIONS

not in the least=
not at all
not a bit
not the least bit

have a clue on

out of work;out of service

parking slop number
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  2个月前   xcdd:
No 55
来晚了来晚了...
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  2个月前   桃之小妖:
33
汗~~写完了这里怎么还是占位呢，这样就给1分~~抓狂ing。。。
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  2个月前   songyy:
719
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  2个月前   坎离:
NO.60
今天写得很迷糊~
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  2个月前   茉莉清茶:
No.7
谢谢 cathysh，明白了哈~~
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  2个月前   cathysh:
呼~~~Ahu这次出的题目不太好写哦，好不容易把筒子们的仿写改完了，改的我头晕眼花~~~

总结一下大家仿写中较容易出错的地方：
1、有些购物商场的地下停车场是如此的庞大复杂，以至大厦主管只好用不同颜色的地区来标示和提示那些司机他们的车子停在哪里。
大家有两种理解：
1）车子停在了哪里
2）车子应该停在哪里
联系上下文来看，我的理解为1），不知对不对呀~ 这里要请AHU帮忙解答了~

2、我的朋友Joey倒是一点都不在乎那些不同颜色的区域标识和车位编号。
be concerned about; care about
sb. is not concerned about sth. in the least
sb. does not care about sth in the least
in the least 丝毫
把in the least放在后面就看的很清楚啦，放在前面是为了强调动作，一点都不在乎~

3、并不是他拥有超强的记忆能力，而是他只记从哪部电梯进入商场，然后记住从电梯到停车处的标识就行了。
take a lift/an elevator/a bus 乘坐电梯/公交车
sb. takes a lift to get into the shopping mall

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